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Title : Endangered Species, Part 1
Author : fredbassett
Fandom: Primeval
Characters : Stephen/Ryan
Disclaimer : Not mine (except Lyle), don't sue
Rating : 18
Spoliers : None
Summary : Nasty things in the woods
Tags : Fic, Slash, Stephen, Ryan.


Stephen glanced at his watch.

Fifteen minutes had passed since Lyle dispatched two of his men out into the night.

Without any instructions needing to be given, the members of Ryan’s team had all stopped drinking. They were simply watching and waiting. Quiet, hard-eyed and very, very dangerous.

Lyle lounged in the doorway of the hotel, looking out past the floodlit area into the darkness of the trees. The only sign of movement was his hands, as he rubbed fingers against thumbs, trying to drive out the pricking feeling.

“Are his thumbs often wrong?” asked Stephen, quietly.

“No,” said Ryan.

Stephen sighed. “So when the shit hits the fan, can I borrow something bigger than the Browning?”

“You can have a fucking rocket launcher if you know how to use it.”

“I’d prefer one of your L96s,” said Ryan’s lover, with a hopeful grin.

Which would be a splendid way to annoy Lester if he ever found out. “What about your dart gun?”

“If I was going to need that, I doubt Lyle would be acting like he’s got a bad dose of eczema.”

He was right, and for that reason the Special Forces leader would give Hart the gun he wanted. Ryan had seen him shoot and he had no doubt that his blue-eyed lover could make good use of the bolt action sniper’s rifle.

It never hurt to have someone on the team who was could handle distance work. Personally, Ryan preferred something which hit harder and was faster for close range work, which was invariably where the action ended up, in his experience, but it was always good to keep your back-up options open.

Lester would no doubt whinge about the issue of weapons to civilians, but Lester was probably sitting on his elegant butt, somewhere comfortable and safe, probably with a gin and tonic in his hand. He certainly wasn’t stuck in an isolated hotel, surrounded by dense forest on all sides, at least three miles from the nearest village, with an unknown threat lurking in the shadows. With big teeth. The sodding things always had big teeth. Or claws. Or something equally nasty like a sting.  Ryan was really starting to go off wildlife. Especially wildlife from different eras. Without a doubt, the preferable way to view the damn things was through gun sights.

A crackle from Lyle’s radio-headset broke the silence. The lieutenant listened intently, then said three words only, “Get back here.”

There was nothing casual about Lyle now. He thumbed a button on the radio control and then spoke quickly and clearly, obviously talking to the two members of his team patrolling the perimeter, “Ditzy? Phil? Watch yourselves. Vermin on the loose. If it looks more threatening than a hamster, shoot to kill.”

Ryan said calmly, “Leave cancelled, lads. Get kitted up.”

Lyle walked back into the bar, his expression grim. “I doubt Mary’s kitchen help will be turning up. My lot found a Peugeot van on the track, 2 klicks down. Something had taken the roof off.”

“Something big with teeth?”

“Or something small with a tin opener, which seems unlikely, so I’m guessing teeth were involved. And probably claws.”

“Blood?”

“Oh yes, lots of it. And a pair of legs left behind in the driver’s seat. Probably got stuck underneath the steering wheel. The torso seems to have been bitten through at the waist.”

“Cleanly?” asked Stephen, trying hard to preserve the same air of detachment as the two soldiers.

“No, messily, by the sound of it, but they can give you a better description when they get back.”

Ryan looked at Stephen and raised an eyebrow.

The younger man shrugged. “It sounds more like one big bite than lots of smaller ones, but I don’t have Connor’s encyclopaedic memory for the bloody things. Do you want me to track it?”

“It’ll probably come to that, but I’d rather talk to the lads first. Lyle, get Mary and her family together. I need to know how many civilians we’ve got to deal with. And get one of my lot to sort some kit for Dr Hart. He wants an L96.” The grey eyes fixed on Stephen were hard and businesslike, the relaxed good humour gone. “Come on, time to get changed.”

They took the stairs at a run. Within minutes, Ryan was back in his black military gear, checking the various pockets of his tac vest methodically. Stephen pulled on a long-sleeved black tee shirt, replaced trainers with boots and grabbed the dart-rifle from under the bed.

“I thought you wanted one of ours?”

“I do, but another gun won’t go amiss. They live in the middle of nowhere so it’s a fair  bet Mary’s husband will shoot, and this has got a better range than a shotgun. It might come in handy for something.”

“Aren’t you going to argue with a shoot to kill policy?” asked Ryan, his voice holding only mild interest, without challenge.

Stephen stepped up close and kissed his lover hard on the mouth. “No, I’m fucking well not. Anything capable of taking the top off a van and ripping someone in half is not something we can afford to try and take alive.”

Ryan’s smile was as cold as a winter’s frost. “Welcome to our world, Hart.” His hand snaked round the back of Stephen’s neck and he pulled him into another kiss, tongue probing roughly, forcing teeth apart, mouths then working together so hard that both men forgot to breathe. Ryan broke off the kiss and stared for a moment into Stephen’s long lashed blue eyes. “Don’t get yourself killed before I’ve had a chance to fuck you properly.”

Stephen smiled, but his expression was bleak. “I’ll do my best.” He brushed his lips across Ryan’s, then tracked down towards his neck, enjoying the rasp of the stubble against his own. He buried one final kiss on the sensitive spot in the hollow where neck and shoulder meet and breathed, “Take care, Ryan.”

And then they were heading back downstairs, Stephen trying to force the adrenaline rush under control. It was going to be a long night, he couldn’t afford to start living off his nerves this soon.

Mary Mitchell and her husband Jim were in the hallway with Lyle, the man’s arm protectively round his wife’s shoulders.

“There are three children in the house, sir,” said the lieutenant. “Seventeen, fourteen and ten.”

“And a pack of dogs running wild in the woods?” Jim Mitchell tightened his grip on his wife. “Pull the other one, Captain Ryan, it’s got bells on.”

Before the Special Forces leader had the chance to reply, Mary said quietly, “We’ve lived here for four years. We know strange things go on in the Forest. We were warned when we bought this place, but we didn’t listen. So what’s out there now?”

Warned? What the hell was the woman talking about? Curiously warred with immediate danger and curiosity lost. There’d be time for questions later, if they survived.

“Does your kitchen help’s boyfriend drive a white van?” asked Ryan.

Mary Mitchell nodded. “Are they all right?”

“Unlikely,” said Ryan, quietly. “Something took the top off the van. One person is definitely dead.”

Right on cue, Lyle’s two men came in through the doors at a run, weapons held ready.

“Report,” demanded their lieutenant, recognising that Ryan was not going to try and cover this one up.  The Witch King could deal with the aftermath. That was what he was paid for.

“One dead, sir. Male. Passenger missing. Something came out of the woods, the van driver swerved to miss it. Right front wheel went into the ditch at the side of the track. He tried to reverse backwards. Something stomped on the bonnet, then ripped the roof off. Peeled it back like the top on a tin of sodding sardines.” The soldier swallowed, glancing hesitantly at Mary and Jim Mitchell. Ryan nodded to him to continue. “Whatever it was bit the driver in half. There’s no sign of the upper torso. The blood trail goes west across the track and back into the trees.”

“What about the passenger?”

The soldier shrugged. “No sign, sir, but we saw blood and fibres on that side of the van, something had been dragged out that way.”

“Alive?”

“We didn’t find any bits left behind on that side, sir.”

“Then we go looking.” Ryan turned to Jim Mitchell. “If you’ve got a shotgun, get it ready. If you need something longer range, use the dart gun, then blast whatever you hit when it’s down, if you can. But for preference, stay inside and stay out of trouble.”

The man nodded and held his hand out for the rifle. Stephen handed it to him, together with the dart pouch. One of Ryan’s men came in carrying the sniper’s rifle he’d asked for and a long ammunition belt. It was a fair trade. Stephen checked the action and gave a slight nod. He was also carrying the Browning pistol but he still felt vaguely underdressed in comparison to the fire-power the Special Forces soldiers were packing.

Ryan handed him a the radio. “Keep that on. Lyle, I want two of your lot here to keep an eye on the house. Mary, is there any chance anyone else from the village will come up here?”

Mary Mitchell shook her head. It crossed Stephen’s mind that neither her nor her husband had mentioned phoning the police, but then with the soldiers carrying enough weaponry to start a minor war, any representatives from the local constabulary would be pretty redundant.

They headed off into the night. Four of the group, wearing infra-red night goggles, kept to the edge of the track, staring hard into the trees, rifles held ready. Stephen chambered a round into the L96, and without needing to be told, kept in the middle of the group. He knew what Ryan felt about civilians on field ops. The captain preferred those in his care to be obedient. That way he was less likely to lose his own men looking after strays. It was a view Stephen had come to respect.

Moonlight filtered down onto the stones of the track, turning puddles to mirrored glass. The road was rutted and muddy. Stephen stopped occasionally, looking for tracks but found nothing. When they came to the car, it was exactly the way Lyle’s man had described, half in the ditch, the bonnet crumpled. Stamped almost flat. The roof had been ripped off backwards, torn and twisted.

Ryan and Lyle approached the mangled wreckage and looked inside, shining a flashlight around the interior. The grim look on both men’s faces told Stephen that what was left of the driver wasn’t a pretty sight, but he was meant to be the monster expert, so he guessed the next bit wasn’t optional. He walked steadily up to the passenger door. The window had been shattered and his boots crunched on the glass. There were blood streaks on the white paintwork and scraps of what looked like a yellow sweater caught on sharp metal fragments on what was left of the door.

The interior was awash with blood, so much so that it was difficult to recognise the mangled remains of a human being. Sickness rose in his throat and he swallowed hard. He was damned if he was going to throw up in front of Ryan two days running.

He stepped back from the van and looked around at the roadway. Even the most optically challenged boy scout couldn’t fail to notice the trampled section of undergrowth leading off to the north side of the track. Stephen found what he was looking for almost immediately, helped by the soft earth bank leading down to the forest floor. He cast the torch beam around a few metres either side of the disturbed ground. His heart sunk even further. This really wasn’t turning into a good night.

Ryan watched his lover kneeling by the side of the road and knew Hart had found something. He walked over and looked down. “Shit.”

Stephen looked up, the moonlight turning his skin to alabaster. “Well, this blows the something small with a tin opener theory.” His face was set in a hard mask, all emotions, including fear, buried deep and locked down. “We won’t find the girl alive, Ryan.”

“How can you be sure?  Its jaws were occupied with the top half of her boyfriend, remember.”

Stephen shook his head. The movement was enough to disturb the fragile hold he had on his stomach. He heaved and deposited its contents into the ditch. Ryan reached down and gave his shoulder a quick squeeze. Hart wasn’t the only one who had been rattled by the sight of the bloody remains in the van. He’d just heard one of his own lads retching in the darkness on the other side of the track. And this was an occasion when no-one would take the piss. That had been a bad sight. Even by their standards.

Stephen straightened up, wiping his mouth on his sleeve and met the captain’s eyes without embarrassment. “There were two of them, Ryan. Either that or the fucking thing had two left feet.” He shone the torch beam into the trees, picking out broken branches well above head height. It was wasn’t going to be difficult to track, not even through the blackness of the forest. But like yesterday, there wasn’t going to be a happy ending. He realised he didn’t even know the missing girl’s name.

“What now?” asked Lyle, appearing at Stephen’s side like a wraith.

“Dr Hart finds it and we kill it,” said Ryan. Silver moonlight glinted into flint-hard eyes the colour of cold steel and reminded Stephen just how dangerous the Special Forces leader was. And he was glad of it. They would need all Ryan’s skills, and those of his men, if they were to stand any chance of taking down the creatures they were going to hunt.

“Do you know what it is?” the brown haired lieutenant asked, staring hard at a footprint that seemed depressingly close to a metre in length. He didn’t know why he bothered to ask the question really. He already knew the salient facts: it was big, it ate meat and it could take vans apart. And it wasn’t the sort of thing anyone in their right mind would want to meet on a dark night.

“It’s big and it’s a killer, that much is obvious” said Stephen. “It will rely on its sense of smell to hunt, so it’s as dangerous in the dark as it is during the day. It can bite a man in half, we’ve seen the evidence of that. As for species,” he shrugged. “I’ve told you before, I’m not Connor. I can think of a few possibilities, but knowing its Latin name before we kill it won’t necessarily help. Just make sure your men know to shoot on sight and shoot to kill.”

“What’ll bring it down best?” queried Lyle. “Head or body shots?”

“If you can, go for a head shot. Its rib cage can probably take a lot of damage before you hit anything vital.”

Lyle nodded and went off to brief the men. Minutes later, they were heading into the blackness of the trees. The conifers were planted in straight rows here, a commodity to be harvested, rather than a natural woodland. And these trees were tall, almost ready for cropping, which made it relatively easy for them to move even under the lowest branches.

That wasn’t the case for their quarry. Branches above head height were snapped and broken, some hanging loose, some littering the ground. The tracks were easy to follow, pressed deep into the soft, thick carpet of pine needles. About thirty metres off the track, Stephen saw a darker patch on the forest floor. Blood, and a slimy pile of what  proved on closer inspection to be entrails. It looked horribly like the creature had stood there for a moment and shaken its head, with what was left of the body still in its jaws.

From the size and shape of the tracks he was now almost certain he knew what they were following. What he didn’t know was what the hell they were doing here, on the wrong side of the Atlantic Ocean. Cutter was not going to like this. It went against everything they had observed so far about the Anomalies. All the previous ones had appeared to open a gateway to the same place, in a different time. Or so they had thought.

At a signal from Lyle the team came to a halt and immediately took up defensive positions around Ryan and Stephen.

“There are at least two of them,” said Ryan, speaking into his radio headset, in response to a question. “They’re big and they’re nasty. Take ‘em down with head-shots if you can. One might be carrying the girl. If she looks in one piece, try and see if she’s alive before shooting.” He glanced over at Lyle. “Ditzy heard something breaking branches. Incoming towards the hotel, he thinks.”

Lyle nodded, his expression grim. “That’d be right from the direction they’re taking.” He shot a questioning glance at Stephen. “Why? Why not just grab their grub and scarper back somewhere warmer and nicer than a wet forest?”

“Small brains,” said Stephen. “Either that or they’re following a scent trail from earlier, left behind by your patrols.”

“Move it!” ordered Ryan.


(Part 2, follows separately.)


Date: 2007-06-10 03:03 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Man With Big Gun)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
So, I was going to post one big review for this at the end of part 3, but I've already got loads of things I want to say that I'll forget if I wait until the end of the story.

This is an absolutely fantastic beginning - I love the way you are ramping up the tension and the danger. And Stephen and Ryan are absolutely, 100% perfectly portrayed. Totally in character.

And, for some reason, the little hint of back story about the owners of the hotel was almost one of the best things about the story. Such a small thing, but it just adds that extra something and shows that you really think about the details.

Okay, now on to the less serious stuff.

One - rocket launcher. Yay! Can't wait to see if one actually makes an appearance later on.

Two - The sodding things always had big teeth. Or claws. Or something equally nasty like a sting. Ryan was really starting to go off wildlife. Especially wildlife from different eras.
Heeheehee.

And three - you can't see me, but I'm bouncing up and down in my chair because I think I know what the the big and scary is! This I have deduced from the mention of the reocket launcher. Although I'm going to look really dumb if I'm wrong...

So I'm going to read part 2 now tofind out if I'm right.

Date: 2007-06-11 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com
This is so very good, and I'm going to comment on each part of this because I just know there's going to be sections I want to point out and go 'I love this!.' You're so good at setting up the story and suggesting menace, which you do brilliantly here,

Vermin on the loose. If it looks more threatening than a hamster, shoot to kill. - Lol, I love Ryan and I love Ryan's team.

You can have a fucking rocket launcher if you know how to use it. -You know it's love when your military boyfriend wants to give you a rocket launcher.

Great stuff!

Date: 2007-06-11 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entangled-now.livejournal.com
Yes, I think Lyle deserves to be in a bit more fic, since he did such a very good job of looking after Stephen!

Date: 2007-07-16 02:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spacemonkey-27.livejournal.com
“You can have a fucking rocket launcher if you know how to use it.”
That has to be my favorite line.

Great set-up. *runs to read the next part*

Date: 2008-01-28 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dopeydora-67.livejournal.com
Ryan broke off the kiss and stared for a moment into Stephen’s long lashed blue eyes. “Don’t get yourself killed before I’ve had a chance to fuck you properly.

Great story here and I do hope that Ryan stays safe....I expect he does as there many more chapters to go and lots more hotness I hope *g*

Oh does Ryan have a first name?

Date: 2008-01-28 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dopeydora-67.livejournal.com
I think I can wait till I have reached the appropriate chapter for Ryan's name.

I decided I had better give my kids some attention and get them ready for bed. I am terrible when I find a story I like...I just can't tear myself away, if you know what I mean *g*

As for SGA, well I total love that show and Rodney/John is my main choice of pairing along with Carson/Rodney and John/Carson/Rodney.

Which fic got you into SGA?

Date: 2008-03-07 11:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysteriousaliwz.livejournal.com
You don't hold back on the gore, do you, lol? But the story is better for it, in this case.

Such a compelling plot.
*scurries on to next chapter*

Date: 2008-05-05 09:54 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - "in ur woods" Connor)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Ooh, so exciting! I'm loving the dark tension, and gore :) and quick, worried kissing mmm. Must dash, need to see what happens...

Date: 2009-01-28 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah-lilzfl.livejournal.com
Or something small with a tin opener, which seems unlikely
LOL!

Aside from the fact that its all very fantastic, I love the bit about the Mitchell's knowing that less-than-normal stuff goes on around them, and that they got warned about them buying the house. To me, at least, it seemed unlikely that there could be a recurring anomaly without someone who lives in/close to the forest noticing!
Also, I just spotted your reply to entangled_now's comment, about Lyle: I suspect he will re-appear at some point
ROTFL!

I am so annoyed I have to go out now and can't read the rest of this until later. :(

Date: 2009-01-28 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah-lilzfl.livejournal.com
Oh, and I forgot...
ROCKET LAUNCHER FTW!

Date: 2009-01-28 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sarah-lilzfl.livejournal.com
Oooooooh, I am intrigued now ;)

LOL, everytime I watch the actual show, I find myself wondering why he's not there making sarky comments *vbg*

Date: 2009-02-26 11:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Loved Ryan's comments re Lester and the wildlife. Plus Lyle's something small with a tin opener. Great banter again.. and action to come! Off to read part 2..

Date: 2009-03-23 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sunsetdawn20.livejournal.com
Aaaaand we're back. *cracks fingers* Ah, nice fics ahead...

“Or something small with a tin opener, which seems unlikely, so I’m guessing teeth were involved. And probably claws.” I know I've said this many times before but I love this man. I want to kidnap him and keep him as my personal slave. Um... did I just say that out loud? Damn, there goes a good plan.

This is so very fascinating, I'm almost enjoying it more than the show itself. lol Well, obviously you've got a hell of a headstart with all that slash and Lyle-awesomeness. :P

Date: 2009-11-16 01:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sallycandance.livejournal.com
I like it! Hmm... strong men with big guns hunting nasty things with claws 'n teeth - my fave scenario!

Where's part two? *is confused* I thought this was a re-read and the other parts are already posted...?

Edit: Found it! Off to read!
Edited Date: 2009-11-16 01:44 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-11-16 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lukadreaming.livejournal.com
Fab fiction, m'dear! The action is great, the setting and the sense of menace really creepy, and Stephen and Ryan are just perfect *g*.

Date: 2009-11-16 08:17 pm (UTC)
ext_27141: (Stephen Motorbike)
From: [identity profile] telperion-15.livejournal.com
*happy sigh* I love having an excuse to re-read this...

I love the descriptions of the soldiers in this - it reminds you that they're trained killers and not fluffy bunnies in tac vests! *g*

Date: 2009-11-16 10:44 pm (UTC)
fififolle: (Primeval - "in ur woods" Connor)
From: [personal profile] fififolle
Two left feet? OMG *iz scared shitless*

This is just incredibly powerful and hard-hitting. The soldiers are palpably efficient and dangerous, and Stephen is scarily trying to keep up.

Or something small with a tin opener
*laughs nervously* Lyle is a star.


Ryan’s smile was as cold as a winter’s frost. “Welcome to our world, Hart.” His hand snaked round the back of Stephen’s neck and he pulled him into another kiss, tongue probing roughly, forcing teeth apart, mouths then working together so hard that both men forgot to breathe. Ryan broke off the kiss and stared for a moment into Stephen’s long lashed blue eyes. “Don’t get yourself killed before I’ve had a chance to fuck you properly.”
Oh god! the emotion in this paragraph is fabulous! Rrrrr. *clings*

Love, love, love it.

Date: 2009-11-18 08:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] reggietate.livejournal.com
Good to read this again; we need more hard-hitting dino hunting adventure in the fandom! :-)

Date: 2010-06-06 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] canadian-jay.livejournal.com
Egad!

That is all.

Date: 2010-11-27 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neferitiel.livejournal.com
The best thing's it's so real. Not just an every day fic.

The hint of someone who warned the owners is Fantastic!

The last sentence of Ryan increases the tension in the readers. Brilliant :D

Endangered Species

Date: 2012-02-23 04:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aunteeneenah.livejournal.com
I'm wondering which species is endangered and starting to think it's of the human variety. lol

Stephen/Ryan are perfect and love Lyle with his fortune telling thumbs.

On to the next chapter . .after I let the dog in.

Date: 2012-03-18 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kerry-louise.livejournal.com
And things like this is why everyone stands up and pays attention why Lyle's thumbs start pricking... eeps!

Date: 2014-05-03 05:29 pm (UTC)
goldarrow: (Stephen Hunting)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
I think this fic has to be one of my all-time favourites, for so many reasons. The relationship developing between Stephen and Ryan, the information about the military procedures, the OCs, the banter and the horror all come together to make pretty much a perfect fic.

“You can have a fucking rocket launcher if you know how to use it.”
LOL. And another LOL for the 'annoying Lester' addendum.

The sodding things always had big teeth. Or claws. Or something equally nasty like a sting. Ryan was really starting to go off wildlife. Especially wildlife from different eras.
I'm not surprised in the least!

“Or something small with a tin opener, which seems unlikely, so I’m guessing teeth were involved. And probably claws.”
Dear Lyle! Always the perfect phrase!

“Don’t get yourself killed before I’ve had a chance to fuck you properly.”
Mmmmmmm...

Either that or the fucking thing had two left feet
*meep*

Love how you slid in the 'same place, in a different time' bit; it opens up the writing possibilities soooo much more! :D

Date: 2014-05-04 02:57 am (UTC)
goldarrow: (Default)
From: [personal profile] goldarrow
I'm so glad!
*hugs*

Date: 2014-08-23 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Lovely interaction between Stephen and Ryan.

Great to re-read this and now I want to re-read all this series again.

Date: 2016-02-19 06:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] knitekat.livejournal.com
Great to re-read this again. Brilliant tension and Lyle's thumbs ftw.

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